The Official Writing Challenge
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08/02/14
Very good message and very well written.

God bless~
I liked the longer lines and the rhyming words.

I don't think there needed to be any more punctuation since the rhythm of the words showed the beginning and ends of thoughts.

It may be better late than never but when will our own "never" come to be. Will it be to late?

Nice work.
08/03/14
Enjoyed. You had some very good points to ponder. Thank you for the blessing. God bless and keep on writing.
08/05/14
This is a well-written article. I agree that there are people hungering for love and some people just cannot give it, perhaps because they have never received it. Those of us who can, it is incumbent on us to do it as we can make a mighty difference to this hurting world.