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I enjoyed your analogies. Very pertinent for everybody to relate to. What a great message about our gratefulness for the gift of eternal salvation in relation to temporal gifts, even as adults! Good message.
Great introduction of your topic "looking forward" by sharing specific events we anticipate throughout our lives. I like how you compared the daily gifts in the advent calendar to the actual celebration of Christmas, and then the ultimate joy - heaven. Little Kay's "hershey, hershey, hershey.." was just too funny! Wonderful tie in the truth that Christ will not say "you, you, you" when he escorts us into heaven. Super job.