The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/05
Eoooyeeeeoooo, very nice entry--! An attention getter. God bless ya, littlelight
08/02/05
I liked your analogies in the airport. The ending was harsh as it needed to be. Good work.
08/03/05
Nicely done, I had to go back and re-read parts, to make sure I was following it -didn't want to miss anything!
boy did I like this one, had me right on the edge of my seat.
Very interesting!!
Woah, that's scary!