The Official Writing Challenge
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This such a good take on Joel. It flowed so well...one little thing the song at the end wasn't needed to me it changed the flow. The free verse was very nice.
Very nice! You show a lovely flow of thought and spirit in your free verse. I've often wondered how song lyrics would go over here in the Challenge; but on the whole I'd say it's better to stick with the poetry form...my own pieces always lose something when I forget this and change the meter at the end. Do keep sharing your wonderful gift!
06/21/06
One of my favourite pieces this week. Well done.