The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/06
Excellent, tear producing, and profound. The loss of a sibling must be difficult, and you turned that situation into one of purpose.
A really memorable and moving account! Thanks so much for sharing it with us.

06/03/06
This was so great! With four younger siblings, I can understand the initail embarrassment. Isn't it great that God can take our embarrassment and turn it into something beautiful?!
06/07/06
What a great read! I could completely picture the scene inside the church. Very good descriptions. I was shocked by the ending. Good writing!
06/07/06
You have quite a gift for bringing your reader right into your story. I found it pure delight to see the morning's events through your eyes.

This is also a beautiful and touching tribute to both your dad and your little brother. I'm sure this story is something your family will treasure always. Thank you for letting us share it, too.