The Official Writing Challenge
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08/25/16
His promise IS still true! Enjoyed this piece. Watch the passive verbs. Perhaps 'the bracelet I wore' rather than 'was wearing'. Also, 'I needed the stillness and the ordinary of the moment' rather than 'was what I needed'. It's stronger without them. Good job, keep writing!
08/26/16
Amen and Amen!
Excellent!

God bless~
"Come unto me all who labor and are heavy laden and I will give you rest."

I liked the short paragraphs. It was easy to read. Your thought expressed your feelings well. The beach painted a picture of peacefulness when looking beyond the inner pain.

God works not only in our lives but also in others. What comes to one person may not be what comes to the other. What God is wanting to accomplish in one may be different from what He wishes to accomplish in the other and each takes it own measures.

Well written. Faithfully use your gift to the measure given, let God deal with the results when you do your part.

Keep your heart in heaven and your eyes in his word.