The Official Writing Challenge
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09/21/13
You have a lot of good ideas here for developing a mind like Christ. It's a wonderful concept and well worth meditating on.

The only thing it lacks is word pictures. For example, you mention having had a bad day. What made it bad? What did you see, hear, taste, touch or smell? How did it make you feel? Draw the reader into your experience by engaging as many senses as possible.

With a little more detail, I think this would make a wonderful devotional. So keep writing and don't give up!
09/22/13
Loved your musings. Honest and indeed showing the characteristics of the renewed mind you speak about.
You are making a gallant effort in changing your thought patterns. Sometimes life is so hard. Writing, as you are doing, is an excellent way to deal with challenging life issues. God knows your heart and believes in you.
God bless. Keep writing.