The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/13
First, learn Challenge paragraphing and spaces between. Second, I must note, the church as a whole was not necessarily obedient - Paul's dilemma; indeed it is by God's Grace we survived at all. Now, the positive - good review of the video.
05/11/13
Nice message and interesting "video" description...I enjoyed this short yet engaging piece. I liked the way you used "sizzle" in describing Jesus, and love in the heart.

God Bless~