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What an awesome story! I was hoping for a happy ending. Well written.
Early on in the story you were able to evoke tears from my eyes. I also like how you showed vulnerability in the son. Prayer too was the key to the whole thing. Good piece.
Nice story! As parents we can all feel the father's anguish. I, too, was glad for the happy ending.
Nicely done!! YOu drew me in and kept me anticipating the ending. The emotions felt by your family decribed very nicely. I felt as though I was right there with you.
Wow! The Lord really gives strength when it's needed. What a beautiful testimony of answered prayer. (I realize he always answers, and not always as we would like--but I LOVE how he answered your prayers here.) Your update on Brooklynn warmed my heart!