The Official Writing Challenge
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Very heart warming, but you made me cry...good job!
10/17/09
Your story was built up just the right amount to evoke the same emotion from the reader as the bride.
I just got home from a sweet wedding, and I now find myself once again in tears for a special bride. Good job.
10/18/09
Well done! Your characters were so likeable and real-to-life. Superb story-telling.
A wonderful story, great characters, very well written.