The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/09
A good story. Thank you for the hope and promise that it contains.
What a beautiful love story! I especially like "But, sometimes it is nice to have a rock you can touch." Very touching, love it!
Where's the kleenex! Just great! Very nice spring love story.
08/03/09
This is a nice little story but sure wish I knew more details. ergh;( Maybe you can expand it for a longer story sometime?
I love stories about new beginnings, and hope for the future. I also loved the image of the river with fog rising in the morning - my favorite time of day. Good job.