The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/09
I love stories where GOOD wins over BAD! I like that the MC did not let his age get in the way of doing right and helping others! Don't forget to use your spell check and also to read your article to check for typos like "know" and "no" that the spell check may not find.
I was afraid that Albert was going to get hurt! I like him as the mc--we should all be as unafraid to stand up to "the bad guys!" Agree with Jana about the spellcheck and proofreading-
Good story.
Good story just let somebody read over your article before you post it as they can show you the errors before you post. But well done