The Official Writing Challenge
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This is good. Like a nice short, snippet into India. I do wish there was more of it, but good job!
02/22/09
You packed a lot of detail into this tiny piece.
Sincerely, I love the relax style of your writing but I feel you need to improve your use of language. Interesting piece! well done.