The Official Writing Challenge
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11/28/08
Great trip through the ages. I liked how you switched perspectives - it was very effective. Good writing.
12/04/08
This was very good. I had a little trouble following at first, but quickly figured it out. So glad Susie finally reconciled with momma, and came to know she really was loved all those years.
12/04/08
I loved this story a lot. Kept me on the edge of my seat. Well written
12/04/08
Steve, congratulations on your Highly Commended in this week's Challenge. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)