The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/05
Charming story, filled with parent wisdom. Really enjoyable read!
It seems the older we get, the wiser our parents become. Thanks for sharing a beautiful story.
07/20/05
Nice story with equally nice moral. Thank you for sharing. God bless, littlelight
07/21/05
Meaningly analogy. You 'voice' his wisdom well. It's a good thing we're 'leashed' ourselves sometimes.
07/22/05
Enjoyable story. Happy that you learnt your father's lesson eventually.
07/22/05
Very nice - a good lesson!
07/24/05
Good analogy and lesson. Thanks for posting.
Great lesson..Nice title too. I enjoyed reading this. Nice job.
07/25/05
A strong sense of the son's voice throughout. Godd devotional piece. Have a look in a fiction book to see how dialogue is set out on a new line for each character. It makes it a much more enjoyable and easier read.