The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/08
This is a much needed service for our present society.
07/25/08
You have an awesome message here. I completely agree with your position.

For me, this would have worked better if you'd made it a fictional conversation between the woman and girl, or included the co-worker in some way. Or, you could have made it a first person devotional piece.

Wonderful point.


07/26/08
oh, so sad... I'm glad you are there to reach out to these young girls. I would have liked to heard more of how lives are changed.

It helps to put an extra space between paragraph/speaker.

Well done. Thank you for writing this.