The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/08
Very appropriate illustration of the topic for this week.

Work a bit on dialogue--some of this sounds a bit stilted--not like the way people actually talk in casual conversation.

So true that we often have no idea what is going on in people's lives.
Good title. You carried the theme through well.
02/02/08
Very good and right on topic. Keep on writing!
Laury
02/04/08
Thank goodness for friends that can see behind the masks we wear.I am a bit worried about the kids and their future, but this was well written and on topic. Nice norms, love Ken.