The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/07
Some lovely bits here - I loved the crown, the way the conversation ebbed and flowed between them, and the way Jesus asked for the dance. Good work (just watch for a few typos)
My favorite lines begin with "What do you think Ashley?" I like that whole paragraph. It touched my heart. Kudos to you!
04/28/07
Brilliant writing. I did not think this was going in the direction it did. Good writing.
04/30/07
Very, very nice. I enjoyed this, and the ending was a great touch. Good work.
Great take on the genre. Loved it start to finish. Great job!