The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved the reminiscing in this piece...sweet and very enjoyable! Thanks for sharing your memory.
03/03/07
What a sweet, enjoyable and well-written essay! I really enjoyed this piece. Keep writing! I can hear your "voice" in the words you write.
03/06/07
Some nice detail throughout! Flowed nicely and brought to mind some nice experiences in my own life. You might want to consider throwing in some dialogue maybe to add some more dimension to it - otherwise - very good!!