The Official Writing Challenge
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02/16/07
A very nice and amusing story. How nice that Kyle was mature enough to forgive you. Nice ending, too. Good job!
Wonderful story. Good writing. The pov fit in nicely. Forgiven by a carpenter.
This is touching and humorous. I really like your descriptions in your writings and the way you teach a lesson through each of your them and your word pictures. I could relate to this one but my accident in a college Stage Desisgn class ended up with a stapler gun going bizerko,grin. Needless to say I stick to manual staplers anymore,hehe. Thank you also for your feedback. God bless your work and keep on writing as you are truly gifted hon.:0)