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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Teacher (10/26/06)
Master Please
I get on my knees and pray, but many times, I don’t know or forget what to say,
Master please.
I try to do good, I try to do right, when I get hit, I turn the other cheek and walk away from the fight
Master please.
The enemy hits me with all he’s got to knock me down, I pray for the problems to leave me alone, to go around
Master please.
I know you love me, but why do I feel like this, the problems are engulfing me, that am wishing for death, or cutting me wrist
Master please.
You are my soul, the teacher of my life; you died on the cross for us, my savior Jesus Christ
Master please.
My surroundings, the people around me hurt, it got to me, now, my heart and soul hurts too
Master please
Help me master, guide me teacher, I can’t without you, my life, my world is terrible what else can I do
Master please
My knees and hands are bruised from praying everyday, for this world that would never change
Master please
I need you by my side, am afraid, scared, so I hid, and if anyone told you this world is right, they lied
Master
We need you, not only me, the world, its people all needs to be freed
Please
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Myrna Noyes
11/06/06
Your poem contains a deep, heartfelt cry to the Lord that is very touching. The anguish of the one praying is very clear. I would suggest some proof-reading of your work before you submit it next time, as there are a few mistakes. Thank you for sharing this piece.
cindy yarger
11/06/06
Your article compelled me to pray for YOU. Your character seemed so without hope and that is really the main thing that we can give one another as christians. HOPE in a world where the enemy would have us believe that there is none, but there is, always in Jesus. Good emotion in this. Blessings and if this is you - hold on - and if it is a character please write another chapter to give her hope!