The Official Writing Challenge
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08/29/19
This is so true! I loved the line "For sure, she’d now stepped in it." I knew the fireworks would being! Well done!
08/30/19
I really like the imagery of a fire with forgiveness putting it out. This is a great poem.
09/02/19
This is good. Some good reminders.
This is great. You create such a vivid picture and end it with a great message.
Love the imagery. Good lesson as well. Well done.
09/05/19
Great cadence and clear imagery. Opening this can of worms is hard on any marriage.
09/05/19
Love it! Well done!
Congratulations! Happy Dance!