The Official Writing Challenge
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What a lovely word picture you've drawn. I read it through twice and was amazed at how beautifully you described the dark night opening to a brilliant new dawn, surely a gift from a loving God. Well done !
This is beautiful. You're a true artist, the paper your canvas, your words the paint. I thought it quite clever to tie in another meaning of broken. It's fresh and invigorating.
Lovely, truly lovely.
12/31/18
Congratulations Verna! Again you have written poetry of beauty and wonder. You have painted a beautiful word picture with great skill.