The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/17
Oh, I love this.

I hesitate to suggest any suggestions, especially since this is a true story. But I think there may have been a better choice of words than "badly damaged" to describe Lol. "with multiple problems" would be my personal choice.

I love that this is a true story. It's clear that this little boy had a great impact on those who met him.

03/08/17
Well- written, heartbreaking story with tough issues and question brought out.
A heartwarming story.
Thank you for sharing this touching story, and being transparent about your struggle through this experience.
03/09/17
Congratulations on your HC, as you've drawn us into the science, the art - and the heart - of nursing care. Well done.
03/09/17
Congratulations on your 4th place finish, Danielle.

I'm glad Little Lol lives on in the hearts of so many.
This is a wonderfully tender story--one that will linger in my heart.
Wow what a stunning story of love and faith. Congratulations on your EC. It's nice to see you writing again.