The Official Writing Challenge
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08/26/16
Beautiful. You did a wonderful job imagining how one man's life might have been.
08/27/16
Powerfully done

God bless~
08/29/16
This was very good. I really like the concept of basing a story around the man who made the cross. You've crafted a solid character whose voice sounds authentic, resulting in a story that felt very real.

My only regret is that the word count really limited your ability to show us a more complete picture of him learning about Jesus. That part felt rushed and I don't know how you could have done it any better without more words.

Really nice work, here. Thanks for sharing it with us!
Congratulations on ranking 20 overall! Happy Dance!