The Official Writing Challenge
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I was right there with the characters as if I was reading a book. This story had me hooked from start to finish. Well-written and engaging.

God bless
02/29/16
You left me hanging-in a good way. I want to know what happens next. Great character development in this well-written story.
03/01/16
Loved it. Exceptional.
03/02/16
This was a very intriguing story. The MCs were very believable.
03/02/16
I enjoyed this story. You pulled me right in and kept me there.
My heart continues the story to many more chapters of this promising tale. Lovely. Delicious with promise . . .
Congratulations on ranking 23 overall. Happy Dance!