The Official Writing Challenge
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12/03/15
I enjoyed this.

God bless~
12/03/15
This poem was a clever and fun read. Your title summed it up nicely.
12/03/15
Ha! What a fun tale in perfect meter and rhyme. This has everything: humor, conflict, poetic elements. The ending with the brother's "fish stew" puts this over the top. Great work. I love it.
12/04/15
This poem had a nice flow and was a fun read. I enjoyed how the brother ended the feud. A fine kettle of fish they got themselves into.
12/05/15
This is a delight to read. I like the humor and the rhythm. Well written.
Oh I wish I could write poems like this. It flows perfectly. The rhymes are divine, and it left me with a big smile on my face.
12/07/15
Clever and creative, with a cute twist that defuses the tension.
This tickles the funny bone! What a creative, delightful piece!
12/10/15
Lighthearted fun read....but under the humor lies a good message. Masterfully written! Enjoyed!
Congratulations on ranking 11th overall! Happy Dance!