The Official Writing Challenge
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04/25/15
I really enjoyed this read, it was so inspirational! It provokes the reader to look around them and make note of blessings they may have been taking for granted. This story was so well done!
04/27/15
Well written and well done!

God bless~
What a clever idea. The juxtaposition of the two characters was a brilliant way to introduce your message without coming off as preachy. I'm sure many will recognize themselves in one character or another. I know I did and plan on changing my outlook immediately. Congratulations on ranking 17th overall! Happy Dance!