The Official Writing Challenge
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03/06/15
Tranquility eneveloped my soul reading this piece.

Beautiful!

God bless~
03/06/15
"Enveloped"
03/10/15
I love the whimsy of the sun playing peek-a-boo with the clouds! Each stanza builds so perfectly. Then the power of each final line reverberates your Message! The words of hope, despite trails, in your final stanza bursts brightly on the reader (to borrow a phrase from your first stanza.) Gorgeous and Wow! This leaves me breathless!
My heart thrills to your beautiful stanzas!
03/12/15
Congratulations!

God bless~
Congratulations, Verna! This is lovely.
03/13/15
Congratulations, Verna. Your lovely poem is a deserving EC winner.
Wow Verna, this is both staggering truth and immensely beautiful. I'd like to comment on a favourite line but there are too many! Your descriptions are just exquisite and a mind-blowing reminder of God's wonderful gifts and huge bounty. I love the recurring 'then I know' and I love too the honesty and assurance of your last verse. Such a well deserved EC.Thankyou.