The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/15
Beautifully done!

God bless~
01/30/15
Gorgeous thoughts in this prayer! I especially loved this, "That things I want and things I need -- Are earth and heavenly miles apart."
01/31/15
Just beautiful. Words we need to recall in our own daily struggles with greed.
02/03/15
Absolutely wonderful prayer poem—so many thoughts and truths to ponder within! I just loved this! Great job!
I have tears in my eyes. By the time I was 2 or 3 lines in, I had to stop and start again and pray the words instead of read them. The Holy Spirit placed them in my heart and it feels like you wrote this for me. My first grandchild is due in May and I've been buying her everything. At one point, my younger daughter said, "Mom, you can't buy her love until she's born." Your beautiful prayer was like a punch in the gut (of the very best kind). You really touched my heart and I can't ever express my gratitude at your obedience in God. Congratulations on ranking 18 overall. Happy Dance! In my book though, this ranks as one of my all-time favorites. :)