The Official Writing Challenge
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A very interesting tale! A little confusing to me at times as to who is talking simply because of the lack of names. Also, a bit more action would speed up the pace. But I love the idea, the obvious comparison to the best (Jesus) serving the fallen (us, and the endless paradoxes you introduced. What a wise, and kind, General.