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06/18/10
Love your description of Jesus!
06/18/10
Love the title! Great account of both the compassion and convicting power of Jesus.
This account of the woman from the Gospel of Mark is gripping--very realistic! The first two paragraphs drag a little, and I think they could easily be cut. After that, I was absolutely caught up in the action! I love the scene with each stone-thrower seeing his own sin spelled out in Jesus' scribblings. Brilliant idea. Excellent entry.
06/19/10
Now we finally know what he doodled into the sand--thanks for clearing that up! The first couple of paragraphs, though well written, detract from the drama to come.
06/21/10
I love good Biblical fiction - and this definitely qualifies. I was absolutely engaged. Can't wait to get to Heaven to find out if you were right :)
06/22/10
I'm never a fan of Bible re-enactments, but there is a lot of good things to be said about this one. The title was perfect, displaying Jesus' humility and I loved how sins were exposed, forcing the crowd to move on. Well done!