The Official Writing Challenge
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05/20/10
I love your slant rhyme and unusual poetic format! This flows from your heart, "The mixture’s stirred with tears from my own sorrows…" …and I love this, "This compound that foments inside of me," in relation to your title, "Amalgam." This is so eloquent and masterful!
05/25/10
Wonderful poem - unique rhythm. Great!
It struck me that in just a few words you dove into this piece by comparing the writing process to: eating, traveling, searching for treasure, reading/research, exploring/discoving nature and in the end you pulled it all together into a writer. Skillfully done!