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Sounds like a very trying day here. Thank God for dads.
09/14/07
Yep, my dad rescued me many times when I had nice "surprises" like this one! You wrote this story so well. I could see the traffic jam!
09/15/07
I was right there with ya! Great job of portraying the frustration and stress of this day.
I think we can all relate to days like that. My speedbumbs today were a little different, but no less frustrating. What a great dad to come to your rescue!
09/18/07
Reminds me of a drive through Pittsburgh. Very good description.
I'm so glad I don't face that traffic everyday any more! You described it, and the reactions, perfectly.