The Official Writing Challenge
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01/20/07
Ah, you snuck a history lesson in there! "You are a product of his creativity. He is not a product of yours." This is a great line. It inspires me. Look around at all the fruit of man's creativity. We are created in the image of The Creator. Did I say "create" enough times?? Anyway, I'm inspired to do the same. Blessings.
01/20/07
Very fun - and with a history lesson to boot! I enjoyed the humor in this.
01/23/07
Good mix of scene here - totally unexpected. The dialogue was a little long to follow at times - that would be my only critique - otherwise good solid writing!
01/25/07
Very creative. I had no idea that you were headed in the direction that you took. Well done!