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You've very skillfully brought us into the pain of this young woman ... well done.
Cancer took my own mother before her time, so this story really touched my heart. I could feel your character's pain. I loved the simple sentence "Walk with me" and the repetition made it especially effective. Great writing.
This story spoke to my heart. I too lost my mother at an early age of cancer. This writer has depicted the pain and sorrow of loss clearly, and I loved the ending. I impatiently await resurrection day when I shall see my mother again! Great Job on this "walk" topic!
This is such a beautiful,touching story of God's love meeting us wherever we are and giving us exactly what we need. I really liked how she came full circle back to where she used to be and needed to be. Very well done!
My mom also died of cancer when she was young - I could totally relate to this - you did an exceptional job of sharing her feelings. This was extremely gripping!
This really touched my heart! My mom's had both ovarian & breast cancer, so I could really relate to how you feel.
This was very well done, and believable. Great job.
No need to gulp, this is simply wonderful and such great descriptions. My heart was touched by her pain. Wonderful job.