The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/18
I love God stories like this. He is so faithful and creative in waking us up to what we need to know.
04/20/18
Definitely liked this story. God works in mysterious ways.
Well done. Congratulations!
The story started out very well and grabbed my attention. The first five paragraphs were excellent. From there, it began to become muddle. Comments on the side were unnecessary and interrupted the interest of the beginning. It gradually fell short of an exceptional story as the ending unraveled and seemed to lose focus. Once again, the beginning was very good writing.
04/26/18
Great job!