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TITLE: The Anatomy of a Sneeze | Previous Challenge Entry
By Ruth Neilson
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The air is thick and yellow.
Vehicles of all colors of the rainbow
Start sporting similar color schemes of yellowish hues.
Allergy season has arrived,
Eyes watering,
That weird tickling in the back of your throat
Combined with the watering eyes.
Quick, try to smother it.
Suppress the sneeze.
At least try to make it sound nice and cute;
A polite, almost dainty 'choo.
It never seems to work against
The snot infestation or
The sniffling, stuffy head feeling,
The precursor to the show.
Can't think
Can't breathe.
Can't talk
Just want to curl up to sleep.
But rest doesn't come.
Constantly blowing your nose,
Trying to prevent the lingering sneeze.
Just keep pushing on,
Spring will be over soon enough.
Must...sneeze
Ahh...
Quick! Grab a tissue
...ahhh...
Batten down the hatches!
......ahhh...
She’s going to blow
Hold the tissue close;
Watch it tatter under the hurricane force
Winds erupting from her mouth
ACHOO!
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Hold the tissue close;
Watch it tatter under the hurricane force
Winds erupting from her mouth"
I love it!