The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow - my worse nightmare...I'm claustrophobic!

Well-written, I was waiting for them to be rescued while racing through the story...LOL. Nicely done.

God Bless~
This was a delight to read. I especially enjoyed the first part as it felt like maybe you had been listening to some of my ramblings. The ending was great too so much was explained when I realized the sister was Deaf. You did a great job.