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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 4 – Masters)
Topic: Cyber Communication (email, IM’s, etc) (11/04/10)
THE VIDEO

The young soldier was ready. Just one more thing to do.

He tilted his laptop so the webcam centered his face on the screen. The worry lines and sad eyes had to go, so he took a breath and composed a smile. One more quick adjustment to his uniform, and he started recording.

***

“Hi Dylan. I hope that’s what your mom ended up naming you, cuz that’s the name we had picked out when I had to tell you goodbye, and that’s who you’ll always be to me.

I wish I could’ve stayed around to find out if you ended up bein’ a girl Dylan or a boy Dylan, but that don’t really matter.

What matters is that you know who I am.

I’m your dad, Dylan, and you’re my kid.

I hate that I’m gonna miss all your birthdays, an’ that’s why I’m makin’ this. Since I can’t be there in person, I figured this was the next best thing.

So happy birthday, kiddo.


If you’re a girl I'd have thrown you the best party and danced you around the room, laughin at the ribbons bouncin in your hair. I’d plant a kiss on your forehead and wish you happy birthday under a spotlight.

If you’re a boy, I’d have taken you to the ballgame and we’d pig out on hotdogs and peanuts and drink too much Coke. An’ I’d have them spell out “Happy Birthday, Dylan” on the big screen.

Since I can’t do those things, I want you to at least be able to see me an' hear me tell you. I promise I’m thinkin’ ‘bout you right now, whether I’m in Heaven with Jesus, or stuck in a POW camp.

I wanna tell you why I had to go, an’ I hope you understand.

See, Dylan, sometimes a person’s got to make a choice. You gotta choose what’s most important for everyone, and you gotta trust that God’ll see you through.

To me, fightin’ to keep our country free is really important.

Fightin’ to keep other people free is just as important.

We got it good here, kiddo. At least we do now. I joined the service to help make sure it stays that way for you. An’ I know that over there there’s a daddy who loves his kids too.

If it means layin’ down my life to save someone else’s...well, I wouldn’t be the first one to do it. I figure yer mom’s raisin’ you to know the Lord, so that’s all I’ll say about that.

Dylan, I love you so much it hurts, even though I've never met you. It’s a good hurt, though. A love hurt.

If you’re a girl, I know you’ll feel that kind of hurt someday. And if you are a boy, I hope you do. I really hope you do, son.

I love you, Dylan. Happy birthday.”

***

The Soldier pressed STOP and wiped the back of his hand across his eyes. After logging onto his web mail, he composed his last love letter to his wife.

***

“My Sweet Dumplin,

You know I hope with all my heart that I’ll be back home with you for good in two years. I’ll be praying for that as long as I’m gone, and I know you will too.

But you also know there’s a chance I won’t come back.

This war won’t be over anytime soon, no matter what the media says. There’s real fighting still going on, and people are still dying.

I made a video, just in case I don’t make it home. It’s for Dylan. I want you to play it for him or her on the day he or she gets here, so my voice will be one of the first ones the kiddo hears. I probably won't be there for birthday number two, so play it for the kiddo then. And on every birthday after that if I’m not there for whatever reason.

I don’t want Dylan to grow up not knowing me.

I love you my sweet apple Dumplin. And I’ll never stop. I hope to see you real soon.”

***

He attached the video and scheduled delivery for six months from today. After another swipe at his eyes, the young soldier shut down his computer, and stood to go.

The transport was waiting.
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Anita van der Elst
11/11/10
How appropriate to read this on Veteran's Day. Well-done.
Beth LaBuff 
11/15/10
oh wow! Haunting, poignant! This gripping tale was well-delivered (as far as your writing). Yes, I'd definitely love to read more!
Tim George
11/16/10
You have to know how much that story hits my heart with a son about to leave for war a third time. You did a great job of capturing the tenderness of a warrior and yet the harsh reality they face every day. Well told and well done.
Caitlyn Meissner
11/16/10
This may me tear up. You did a wonderful job capturing a father's love for his child, as well as a soldier's devotion. Great job!
Verna Cole Mitchell 
11/16/10
This is a masterful story on so many levels.--a story to remember and be thankful for our soldiers.
Loren T. Lowery
11/16/10
Very gripping and so real. Loved it. Held my attention and I could feel your MC emotions and was empathetic with him the entire time.
Jesus Puppy 
11/17/10
Heart felt and painful story of a father's love. So many youn gmen go off to battle for this country's, this world's, freedom, never to be seen again. My heart goes out to all that read this, that they would know the price paid.

A very well done piece.
Barbara Culler 
11/18/10
So sad, yet so true. Good job.
Melissa Lindsey
11/25/10
I could not read this article fast enough due to the suspense of what would happen.

I still want to know more!

I am so thankful to all that have given up their own right to freedom in order to protect the majority.