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Excellent opening line and you draw the reader into the emotional side of regret well. I'm not too fond of the repetition at the beginning of each paragraph--you could have used that line to say the same thing with different words--but you wrote this well.
This is a beautiful story. I felt the heaviness of the road was symbolic of the sadness of her decision in the past.
Very sad remembrance. Forgiving ourselves is the hardest.
Oh, I could feel the heaviness of their heart! Regret. It's a powerful force.
I was very touched by this moving piece. Very well written, you can feel the sad emotions.
So powerful, with incredible imagery that just pops out at you. Excellent.