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05/26/06
I think I've been to BBB Church! Nice dialogue. And the key here? She submitted herself unto God, opening herself up to Him. In His Presence is fullness of joy! This is 'put together' very well. I enjoyed reading it!
05/26/06
You just about had me jumping to my feet and shouting AMEN with the rest of the congregation! I could see everything very clearly. Great job.. Kate~
05/30/06
I liked this because it was timeless--could have been written about almost any time period for the past 50 years, and almost any region. A wonderful picture of re-capturing joy.
This sounds like some of the churches I've been in and it felt so goooood. Great piece. I love this little church.
06/01/06
Wonderful! Really enjoyed reading about the services at 'The Beulah Baptist Church.'