The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/21
You were so kind to review "The Swim Cap" short story I wrote several years ago. I wanted to reciprocate. I have to admit I was intimidated when I learned of your status at Faithwriters, but here goes. I found your writing (Bible study) to be very thought provoking. In fact, it caused me to reach for my Bible. I read another of your writings and it also held my attention to what you were conveying. I didn't notice on the other article I read, but the evil secretary in me was distracted a bit by the large spaces between paragraphs. Perhaps that was the norm for Faithwriters when this entry was made. Again, I don't feel qualified to critique anyone's work but I do like to offer what my likes and dislikes are. I am also an observer of grammar and punctuation errors in a writing that has been submitted for the Challenge. That is based, I believe, on my legal field career for 15 years of my life. Nothing was to be sent out that hadn't been thoroughly checked for errors. This is being read early in the day and it sets the tone for my Bible reading this morning.