The Official Writing Challenge
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05/27/16
Being technology illiterate, it was hard for me to follow the terminology. However, it looks as though someone who understands it all would find this a blessing as you brought the true spiritual meaning out.
05/28/16
Interesting to read.

Red ink:
algorithm - most of us, not in the computer programming world, know what this is, what it means, how it's used, and why. Is there another way you can explain algorithm without using the technical term?

increased memory to the heart drive - presume you meant hard drive.

Keep writing.
05/31/16
I loved this whole piece.
I believe you had a reason for writing, "Heart drive" to increase the "love" to bring forward the result.

I'm thinking that was intentional!

Blessings~
06/02/16
I love the unexpected ending. Your audience may be limited with the technical jargon, but still excellent.
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