The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/15
Interesting devotional. I wondered what happened about the table.

Good use of scripture and well written. Thanks for sharing.
06/03/15
What a creative way to write a parable. I suggest that you write out the verses. Most readers won't take the time to look them up. Also, you change your POV from Mr. Benson to the garbage man. (What's his name?)
With a little tweaking, this could be a great devotional.
06/04/15
I wanted to answer your comments. Mr. G represents "God". Mr. J represents "Jesus" and HG represents "Holy Ghost". Hope this clears up the confusion. Also, the whole story is a parable about the nature of God, not Mrs. Benson.