The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/05
This is a truly wonderful entry. I love the way truth prods at the seeker and sits her on a rock. You created a wonderful picture of a tormented lost soul and the moment of salvation. (“Journey,” she asked with wide-eyed wonder? Delete the comma and put the ? after journey.)yeggy
11/08/05
This piece is RICH! Beautiful work. Congratulations!
11/08/05
This piece is poetry to the ears in its slow and rhythmic cadence. It reinforces the story line guiding with the Song Of Life.
Captivating tale! Similar in tone and style to -Hinds Feet on High Places-, and even =Pilgrim's Progress-.