The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/05
Neat-o ending! Good use of the topic, too.
11/01/05
Haha, you made me laugh at the end.
11/03/05
Fun story.
11/04/05
I'm still a little confused as to how she actually managed to escape, was he in the room and blinded by the light? Why couldn't she see him? Was the click a gun as I'd thought, or him going out the door, and giving her a chance? I could just be having a vague moment, but the details of an escape draw me in. Of course, this could have been a sacrifice to the word limit...
I loved the twist at the end, fully expecting her to be rescued by the police, that snuck up on me and I loved it!
:) Karen
11/05/05
I liked the circular ending, but I did get that one of the assailents was an officer, seemed to be a good, honest one that recognized the fact that she thought on her feet (LOL)- Interesting and suspenseful. Good work. God bless ya, littlelight
11/05/05
Very very nice!
11/06/05
Definitely on the theme. Great twist at the end.
11/07/05
Hello dear friend. Just popping in very quickly to let you know that you were in the top 30, ranking 23rd overall (out of 145 entries). Well done. Love, Deb