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By Linda Watson Owen
10/05/05
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I have a hosta haven nestled under shag bark trees,
where in the cool of autumn’s dusk I linger with the breeze.
As summer’s sun turns into fall and hot cares fade with day,
I find my green cathedral here and steal away to pray.

It’s here beneath the rustling leaves with asters, lace, and rose
that I can still my hurried thoughts and feel a sweet repose.
Among the songs of nature’s own I sing my hymn of praise,
and in the quiet of this cove, my heart to Him I raise.

Communing with the Lord I love in this secluded nook
is such a blessing to my soul as I lift eyes to look.
The heavens high above remind that He shall always be
much greater far than any care or woe that touches me.

I breathe the scent of floral dew and know it is His Will
to bring His beauty to my life, my every need fulfill.
God knows what’s best for me today. I know His plan is right.
I choose to trust the Father’s love, trust faith instead of sight.

So in this hosta haven, where prayer and praise unite,
I once again renew my vow to walk in Jesus’ light,
to grow into His likeness and blossom in the Wind
of His sweet Holy Spirit, a fragrant Rose for Him.

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10/11/05

Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing a lovely poem that's true in both rhyme and meter! This is just gorgeous. I had never hear of "hosta" before--I had to look it up--so I wonder if you might draw in more readers to read your whole poem if you chose a more familiar plant to them. But on the other hand, I also like the alliteration of the phrase "hosta haven." It's your call! Again, wonderful job!

Alexandra Wilkin

10/11/05

Oh this really flows so well! Very smooth, and as someone who loves to find a quiet space in green solitude to pray and commune with our Lord, this resonates with me. I had a smile on my face from start to finish. God bless.

10/11/05

A lovely presentation of your "Hosta Haven", connecting you to heaven.

10/12/05

Very tight.. very well constructed. Nearly perfect. Excellent work.

10/13/05

10/13/05

Oops, bumped a button to soon, sorry. Anyway, this was an excellent poem. You definitely deserve the promotion to advanced! Great job!

10/13/05

A serene poem, beautifully written in every way.

10/13/05

Perhaps the hosta is more common in NZ for I too know what it is - even if I've never grown one. Agree with others' comments. Loved the way the flower imagery flowed throughout the piece - not just when you mentioned your hosta haven. Well done and beautiful work.

10/13/05

What a beautiful picture - well done!

10/13/05

I know what hostas are - we have them in Canada. This is a beautifully crafted poem. I love the line, "trust faith instead of sight". Great work!

10/13/05

Sweet poetry flows from your pen, Ms. Owen! Wonderful work!

10/13/05

Did I say I loved poetry? This one is wonderful! Everyone should have a sanctuary where only thee and the Almighty dwell.

10/13/05

You're talent is showing! :) Loved it! Just beautiful!

10/13/05

Nice idea. Beautifully written. The fourth stanza is my favorite.

Shari Armstrong

10/14/05

Made me want to vist your haven :)

Lynda Lee Schab

10/14/05

Two words: Simply beautiful. Outstanding piece of poetry, with perfect rhyme and meter. I agree - you have an obvious gift for poetry. Awesome!
Blessings, Lynda

10/14/05

Wonderful poem! Just beautiful! And I love Hostas! So simple and beautiful! I could picture your place well and sensed the tranquility.

10/15/05

This is a gift for us, thank you. Beautifully done.

Amy Michelle Wiley

10/15/05

Beautiful! I didn't know what a hosta was either, but I did like tha aliteration. :-) I loved the poem.

10/16/05

Beautiful. My favorite line: "Blossom in the Wind of His sweet Holy Spirit." This poem is "a fragrant rose for Him." It has such a lovely melody. It's a true blessing to read.

10/18/05

Linda, I also echo Jan's comment. I adored your poem. It was a winner in my eyes (but of course, it doesn't rest solely on me). Your poetry is a constant blessing.

Love always, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)