The Official Writing Challenge
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05/30/05
Nice take on the theme. I liked the end when the friend was found to be standing on the solid rock. This piece would work quite well as a longer piece with more development to the debates between the two friends.
I especially liked the ending and the metaphor of the water.
05/31/05
Loved the imagery and the ending! Great theme for these times. Thank you.
05/31/05
A beautiful use of a continuous metaphor; a very creative way to state a testimony. Nicely done.
06/02/05
It's so true, one minute we are blind and the next we see.
06/03/05
Very well crafted. It all fit together from beginning to end.
06/06/05
WOW! What a birth day! Very well written take on one's spiritual re-brith.