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Topic: Happy (07/12/07)
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TITLE: A Day In The Life Of Toes | Previous Challenge Entry
By Laurie Glass
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ADD TO MY FAVORITES
ooohh, aaahh,
ooohh, aaahh…
Revitalizing, ravishing,
renewing, refreshing,
happy to breathe free,
happy are we.
Beep, beep, beep…
blue fuzzies,
fibers give us a zing,
soft, soothing,
between us, feel the tingling,
sensation gets us giggling.
Cold, cold, cold…
step quickly,
stand quietly,
try not to complain.
Dancing droplets…
freely flowing,
trickling, tickling.
Toweling
above,
beneath
and in between -
sparkling drops
dissipate, evaporate,
between us happy toes.
Prepared, perky,
spirited, sprightly,
resolute, ready
for another day.
Weight descends,
we bend,
stable, steady,
we feel the rhythm,
revel in the trend.
We’re up, we’re down,
in the air, on the ground.
Happy for a bit
until we’re feeling squished.
What happened?
Where’s our space?
No longer can we jiggle,
there’s no place
to even wiggle.
We’re sweating,
smelling, suffocating.
Cramped beyond belief,
confined, closed in,
can’t seem to get relief.
Steady, stable steps
a memory,
now suffering
and feeling squeezed,
in misery.
Weight descends,
we bend.
When will it ever end?
Unhappy now are we.
The time has come,
we’re free again,
our misery ends,
unsquished, unsqueezed,
couldn’t be more pleased.
Inhale, exhale…
ooohh, aaahh,
ooohh, aaahh…
revitalizing, ravishing,
renewing, refreshing,
happy to breathe free,
happy toes are we.
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Nice walk through the day in the life of TOES! You did a great job pulling me in with their various emotions. ;-D